Matt Bellamy

You could totally turn this into a haiku - it has seventeen syllables! Like this: Today I glanced at a tangerine. It was green. The tangerine screamed. Of course, it's ...

Hey! I like how mysterious this poem is, and you know what I think would be great? A second poem - like, a separate poem altogether, like a sequel, that ...

Hi! I like your idea for this poem but I think it's a little difficult to follow. If you could separate the two voices more clearly, I think that would ...

The title of this poem drew me to it, and I was not disappointed! I love how sort of humorous this is, though still with a touch of sincerity, and ...

Hi! I feel your emotion through this poem but I think that some parts of it are a little cliché - comparing tears to rain, for example. As Lavvi said, ...

Hello! I think this is a good start and where you put your explanation that the person gets cut off by a bullet could be really good. But if you ...

Hello! Sorry if I repeat anything that's been previously said, but if I read other people's comments I might not review anything for fear of not saying anything new! I ...

Hi! I love your tone in this piece. It just sounds really good when I read it in my head. You use some really good description an imagery, and... I ...

Hi there! Firstly, I like the message your poem sends, so that's a plus. And your format is fine, but your first and last lines are a lot longer than ...

This is a pretty original idea - I've never read a poem from the point of view of an emotion before. The first line sounds slightly too casual but I ...

I think this is quite well-written. I like the way you rhymed seams and screams at the end; it made it seem very final. It's quite emotional without being over ...

Hey there! I like this and I think your rhyming in particular is very good. I think it would be easier to read though if it was split into stanzas, ...

Hey! I really like the tone to this, it's very emotional and well-written. Two nit-picks though, I think you don't need any commas at all in this line: "It was, ...

This is very bittersweet and emotional, and very well written. If I were your boyfriend I'd love to be given it! I'm sure he'll be able to relate to it, ...

I really like this, and I think the best bit is how it ended. I think comparing the innocence of virginity to pure white snow is a little bit cliché, ...